Great descriptive writing and humor in the whiteboard one. But maybe you could add some metaphors or smilies
i like your repetitioni like your rythem
the way you put the poems were really great because you used a lot of emotion and rhyme. you also made a strong ending and powerful punch to what you did.
thanks
Hi Alex! I am Dohyeon. I really like your poem called the White board because it has lots of onemetapia and also some metaphors.-YOUR BFF DOHYEON
thank you
Great descriptive writing and humor in the whiteboard one. But maybe you could add some metaphors or smilies
ReplyDeletei like your repetition
ReplyDeletei like your rythem
the way you put the poems were really great because you used a lot of emotion and rhyme. you also made a strong ending and powerful punch to what you did.
ReplyDeletethanks
DeleteHi Alex! I am Dohyeon. I really like your poem called the White board because it has lots of onemetapia and also some metaphors.
ReplyDelete-YOUR BFF DOHYEON
thank you
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